Rodrigo's last post correction and feedback

TUESDAY, 9 SEPTEMBER 2008
Learning english (c.) With my t-shirt
Learning English

My experience learning English begins when I was eleven years old, I bought a game of Nintendo (wo.) Entertainment System (NES) called dragon warrior (c.), a game that was the first famous role playing game. The game was awful but I’m very obsessive, I fished (sp.) this game, but the game (nn.) was full of English dialogs, I translate (wvt.) all the game with help from (with the help of )a dictionary and my brother.
In (wprep.) the school I never learn (wvt.) English, in my awful college (ww.) only teach (wvt.) me to ask about the time and the classic “this is the window, this is the door” by three years. By (wprep.) the other hand I translate (wvt.) song and games.
Really (ww.), in the university I learn (wvt.) so much (ww.) than in my school, because the class is better than the school. The “T- Shirts” (it’s a joke) teachers Simon and Carroza, are good teachers, and in the class program teach (who?) things very useful (wo.). Also I talk in English with my classmates about daily thing (sm.), means (sm.) transport, films, music, books, etc. I like very much the English class.
That’s all folks, and study English (sm.) is very useful, to work, study, reed (sp.) more things, to meet people etc, etc.
Have fun, folks
POSTED BY RMONTES AT 16:37

The main mistake that Rodrigo has made this time is that he has switched verbal tenses. As you can see in the post, he starts telling in past, and then switches to present.
The other mistakes, such as word order, spelling, and accuracy in prepositions, are little things (for the moment), that he’ll improve as long as he keeps writing.
So far, he has done a great job!...keep improving your writing!