Post Correction

A BLOG RATER? ...take a look at this one.
As many of all (this) these ways of on line communication, blogs (are) were created to express yourself, tell about your interests, what are you spending your time in, show points of view…WHATEVER! (And then, get) in order get to know you more. That’s why; I think these should represent how the person really is in terms of (his/her) (x) way of writing, the colours he/she uses, the features chosen, etc. By this, I could tell that the blog: “I’m so weird…but I’m happy” by Javiera, is not the way she is, or at least, (like) the way I see her almost daily. But it has lots of good things to look at, beginning by Javy`s profile.

I think the design ought to be changed, as well as the colours in order to look more (brightly) brighter and attractive. However, the posts are all very good and very interesting, and almost all of them have a picture to illustrate what she is talking about, which is very good and catching for people who visit it.
As I said before, one of the posts’ purposes is showing author’s points of view. In this case, this blog has been very helpful because I’ve had the chance to know what Javiera thinks about different issues, which is always positive in order to have an approach to the person.